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This page contains numerous comic book scripts created as writing samples and based on some of the most popular characters in the world.

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WHAT IF: SPIDER-MAN
"What If Uncle Ben Had Lived?"
(22 Pages + Synopsis)

It's simple. Peter sticks out his leg, trips the burglar, the guard arrests him, and Uncle Ben lives! This minor change comes major consequences. Peter, freed from the burden of being a hero, pursues his wrestling career to superstar heights. But fame and fortune also makes him a target. And when Peter refuses to throw a match for the sinister gangster known as The Fixer, Peter learns the price of fame can be steep... and deadly.
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DAREDEVIL
"First Crush"
(22 Pages)

Matt Murdock’s childhood crush has returned to Hell’s Kitchen, as a murder suspect. Her name is Jen Miller, and she’s being accused of shooting her husband point blank in the chest. Matt is eager to help Jen and to rekindle the friendship they had once shared. The only problem is that all the evidence points to Jen as the killer. Can Matt prove her innocence?  Is there any innocence to prove?

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THE GRIM HUNTER
"The Hunt"
(22 Pages + Synopsis)

Before he became the Grim Hunter, Vladimir Kravinoff traveled to the Savage Land to prove himself by killing a Tyrannous Rex -- with only a spear! In the process, he becomes involved in a Savage Land civil war against the Neophytes, a mysterious new tribe using advanced weaponry. Vladimir must join forces with Ka-Zar the Savage to stop these vicious killers, but things get complicated when they confront the Neophyte’s leaders: The Savage Land Mutates!
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THE NEW WARRIORS
"Blast From the Past"
(22 Pages + Synopsis)

Written before the events of the Marvel Civil War, this adventure begins with the mysterious Sphinx who, once again, splits apart into two separate individuals. As a result, all reality is shifted back in time to the day that the New Warriors was founded. Only the original six members (Night Thrasher, Namorita, Nova, Justice, Firestar, and Speedball) know the truth, but not all of them are eager to fix things. Is this a crime, after all, or a chance at a new beginning?

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THE WATCHER: ORIGIN
"Birth"
(22 Pages + Synopsis)

From birth, Young Utau must repress his desire to act  in order to conform to the Watcher's Oath:  Observe and Record. Never Intervene. But as he watches the planet of Aeranti destroy itself in civil war, Utau makes an unspeakable sin:  He saves an Aeranti family at the cost of his own dishonor. Now Utau must submit himself to the Re-Education Institute to win back his status as a Watcher, so long as he survives the experience. 
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X-MEN
"Memories"
(11 Pages)

Jean Grey is gone, again, but not forgotten. Her parents, John and Elaine Grey, have invited Scott Summers to their home to help celebrate Jean’s birthday. Gathered around a strawberry birthday cake, each family member recounts his or her favorite memory of Jean. When it’s Scott’s turn to share, a flood of memories overtakes him. Eventually, he chooses just one, and it’s not the one you’re expecting.


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SPIDER-MAN
"Killing Spiders"
(11 Pages)

Long before he was your friendly neighborhood Spider-Man, Peter Parker was just a timid boy trying desperately to fit in with his junior high companions. When classmate Jason Cronin befriends Peter, he feels like he may have finally made some friends. The only problem is that Jason likes to torture spiders for fun. Peter must now face that difficult choice that every teenager must make:  Go with the crowd, or stand for what’s right.
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HARRY POTTER
"First Meetings & Final Farewells"
(5 Pages)

Created for the Comic Experience monthly challenge, this tale takes place during the Wesley/Delacour wedding. With the threat of the Deatheaters growing stronger, Harry decides to travel back in time and kill Tom Riddle before he becomes Voldemort. Using McGonagall's Time Turner, Harry travels to Hogwarts in the 1940's, but what he finds there will repercussions he could never have imagined.

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GLORIANNA SILVER
"The Fire Within"
(8 Pages + Synopsis)

Written for the Top Cow Talent Hunt, this story reimagines the character of Glorianna Silver as a troubled teenage girl, obsessed with fire and tormented by the voices that tell her to "Burn it all. Burn it all down."
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STAR WARS
"Stronghold"
(8 Pages)

Created for the Comics Experience monthly challenge, this tale takes place post-Episode VI. The rebel allaince has captured Empire strongholds throughout the galaxy, but one stronghold remains impenetrable -- the private stronghold of Darth Vader! Now, Luke Skywalker must enter alone and discover what lies at the heart of Vader's most guarded secret.

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PANDORA
"Titanic"
(12 Pages)

Pandora’s quest to destroy the demons from her box has lead to some pretty amazing places, but none stranger than the RMS TITANIC. While chasing a shape-changing monster through the ill-fated ship, Pandora comes across a horny young man named Jack and his jealous lover Rose (That’s right. This is the version you didn’t see in theaters). Pandora must now hunt down the demon while fighting off Jack’s sexual advances. This is Pandora’s craziest adventure yet.
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MARY JANE
"Forgiveness"
(11 Pages)

Twelve years ago, a teenage Mary Jane Watson left her home, along with her sister and mother, to escape the clutches of her abusive father. Today, her father is asking to see her as he lies on his deathbed. Despite her better judgment, Mary Jane goes. Her father begs MJ to forgive him for all the wrongs he had done, all the pain he had caused. Can Mary Jane bring herself to forgive the one man she has hated all of her life?


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MICHAEL FINNEGAN
"Cool As Ice"
(8 Pages + Synopsis)

Written for the Top Cow Talent Hunt, this story reimagines Michael Finnegan as a world-renowned movie star with a career almost as big as his ego. But when he comes into contact with the mysterious Glacier Stone, Michael must deal with disgruntled Ice Giants, permanently blue skin, and the worst menance of all: the paparazzi.
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SUPERGIRL
"For the Girl Who Lost Everything"
(1 Page Pitch)

Ensnared by the Black Mercy, an alien life form that drains your energy while granting your deepest wish, Supergirl dreams that she’s back on Krypton with her family. But along with her family comes the crushing expectations to follow in her father’s footsteps. Now, the only way for Supergirl to escape the Black Mercy is for Kara to face the greatest challenge every teenage girl must face: finding herself.

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SPIDER-MAN
"The Spectacular Spider-Boy!"
(11 Pages)

There’s a new superhero in town, and his name is Andy Lazer, the Spectacular Spider-Boy! Andy was born with the mutant ability to choose which powers he manifests. He models his powers after his favorite hero, Spider-Man, in the hopes of becoming Spidey’s sidekick. Spider-Man says no, at first, but eventually reconsiders. By then, however, Andy has had a bit of a change of heart.
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X-MEN
"The Garden"
(11 Pages)

Trevor Albright is new to the Xavier Institute, but he’s already on thin ice. He’s been in two fights in the past three weeks. One more fight and he’s out, but Ororo Munroe (also known as Strom) isn’t ready to give up on him yet. Noticing Trevor’s interest in plants, Storm enlists his aid in rebuilding her garden. He reluctantly agrees, but will it be enough to keep Trevor out of trouble?

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TOM JUDGE
"The Fall"
(8 Pages + Synopsis)

Written for the Top Cow Talent Hunt, this story sheds light on the mysterious origins of Tom Judge. Before he was a hard-drinking, foul-mouthed man of the cloth, he was a young, idealist priest on a mission to find the good in all mankind. But when Tom Judge is called upon to perform the exorcism of a young girl, his concepts of good and evil will be  questioned, and his actions will mark the beginning of his fall from grace.
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VOGUE
"Not Tonight"
(1 Page Pitch)

No character is sexier, tougher, and more deserving of her own short comic than Vogue, the Russian gymnast turned special agent turned cosmetic mogul. In this story, written for the Extreme Comics Writing Contest, Vogue confronts one of the greatest menaces to her motherland: human sex trafficking.

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PANDORA
"Medieval Times"
(12 Pages)

The year is 1291 AD, and a vicious dragon is devastating the English countryside. Pandora requests the aid of King Edward in order to defeat the beast. Unfortunately, the king is a sexist pig who feels that Pandora should put her “talents” to more appropriate use in the bedroom. Now Pandora must defeat this chauvinist king before she can face the dreaded Dragon of the Cave.
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BATMAN
"Dear Bruce"
(5 Pages)

With the requirement that all captions be in second person narrative, this Comic Experience challenge follows Batman through a violent slugfest with Killer Croc, while millionaire playboy Bruce Wayne must deal with an unfamiliar hardship: his very first "Dear John" letter. 


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